May 18- mon
Amanda took over us for the second part of the journey for P3 and she helped me look through the storyboards to see what could be done to salvage the story. The same comment I got was that she was unable to understand story too due to a shortage of panels which, although was what Alan mentioned to me too only goes to show that it is a obvious mistake that I had to rectify.
Amanda also pointed out the frames in which my 180 degree rule had been broken and that my ending had been too abrupt. She asked me to redo my storyboards and show it to her tomorrow.
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