Fri
Aft submission v tired.wen to 2d lab to do. Created a new rocky background.
Sat-
Many of us went back to school today to try to complete our work and give each other suggestions. We had set targets to complete a certain amount of scenes but wasn’t able to. I hope all can be completed.
I tried shortening the story with opinions from Kezia and Yi chuin too. But my newest idea with their significant contribution is to show that the penguins were collecting a small fish pile and after that, the penguin walks closer to the stone and he throws down he fish too. But when he does that, the other penguins got a shock looking at the comparisons.
Discussed with chuin n kex hw to shorten
Discussed colours wif chuin n vv 4 rocks
Sunday, June 14, 2009
Thursday
Thursday
There is a submission for character desugn tomorrow and thus we had to stop P3 for a day to focus. Today will be a sleepless night again and we hope all goes well tomorrow! Had to focus on character design.
There is a submission for character desugn tomorrow and thus we had to stop P3 for a day to focus. Today will be a sleepless night again and we hope all goes well tomorrow! Had to focus on character design.
tues
Tues
In school today, I created a short turn for the starting shots and animated the walk. I am going to start drawing the rocky background for the other penguins to come on. I am thinking of shotening the storyboards.
In school today, I created a short turn for the starting shots and animated the walk. I am going to start drawing the rocky background for the other penguins to come on. I am thinking of shotening the storyboards.
Friday
Friday
Today, I came uo with the finalised penguin in flash and tested the line quality in blue or black outline. Black outline works fine.
However, I met with a problem where my background design is pixilated and thus, next time I should work in a higher resolution and double e size n re import so that it will affect less.
Production
Today, I came uo with the finalised penguin in flash and tested the line quality in blue or black outline. Black outline works fine.
However, I met with a problem where my background design is pixilated and thus, next time I should work in a higher resolution and double e size n re import so that it will affect less.
Production
Thursday
I consulted Amanda again today and she said my style is alright but I really have to speed up with the animating.
I also decided to work with flash and I have edited storyboards. However,I treied to cut short many frames as I am really short of time, but Amanda advised me that the net scene has to stay because it makes the flow clearer, and I added more scenes in. eg e guy catching e penguin.
I also decided to work with flash and I have edited storyboards. However,I treied to cut short many frames as I am really short of time, but Amanda advised me that the net scene has to stay because it makes the flow clearer, and I added more scenes in. eg e guy catching e penguin.
Wed
As for my presentation today, I had received comments that my story can still be clearer and I have to speed up my working pace.
Greg also commented that my frame non the penguins looking upwards is too straight and dosen not look like its looking at the right direction which I agree with. Kezia gave me great ideas on making my scene more humorous by showing the wild penguins collecting fish, and there was even a pile, but yet, it’s still smaller than e big fish the penguin brought from town.I thought that was funny. And as for the truck part, instead of both penguins behind the truck, they commented that I could use one scene of the penguin in front of the vehicle and the other behind to show boarding n alighting.
Amanda and Yichuin also suggested changing the shop to a open one instead and it ends with a shock on the fish monger’s face and the penguin and truck owner looks at each other when at the truck scene to show more interaction.
As for the ending, to make it clearer when the ending scene pans up to sky, the END word should come in there.
Thanks everyone for your valuable comments, I am trying my best to make the changes.
Greg also commented that my frame non the penguins looking upwards is too straight and dosen not look like its looking at the right direction which I agree with. Kezia gave me great ideas on making my scene more humorous by showing the wild penguins collecting fish, and there was even a pile, but yet, it’s still smaller than e big fish the penguin brought from town.I thought that was funny. And as for the truck part, instead of both penguins behind the truck, they commented that I could use one scene of the penguin in front of the vehicle and the other behind to show boarding n alighting.
Amanda and Yichuin also suggested changing the shop to a open one instead and it ends with a shock on the fish monger’s face and the penguin and truck owner looks at each other when at the truck scene to show more interaction.
As for the ending, to make it clearer when the ending scene pans up to sky, the END word should come in there.
Thanks everyone for your valuable comments, I am trying my best to make the changes.
Tues
There was presentation of our progress and we got to see Germaine’s piece. It was short,clear and funny and I enjoyed it. Tri’s colours and audio had an improvement.
Rachael’s had funny and cute characters. I thought Shu xian’s chicken is really cute and had nice stylizing, but don’t be over stressed!
Rachael’s had funny and cute characters. I thought Shu xian’s chicken is really cute and had nice stylizing, but don’t be over stressed!
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